Copywriting Information

Super Verbs Really Move Your Copy


Run or hustle? Eat or devour? Move or scurry? You can boost the power of your copy by boosting the quality of verbs you use. Verbs show action, and the way you describe that action can have a dramatic bearing on your readers. Why would you want to fill your copy with complacent words when you can conjure emotions and visual imagery in the hearts and minds of your readers? Sure, "run" and "hustle" both indicate that someone is moving fast. But "run" is a dull, ordinary verb while "hustle" evokes definite images in your reader's mind.

Hadn't really thought about it? You should! You can choose commonplace verbs like "talk," "make," and "like," or you can electrify your copy instead with verbs like "chatter," "discover," and "adore."

Look at these examples to see what I mean:

Before

Down Comforters Let You Get Warm

When it's cold outside, get into bed and warm up with our genuine goose down comforters. There's no reason to be cold when you can heat things up instead!

After

Down Comforters Let You Snuggle

When it's cold outside, leap into bed and burrow down with our genuine goose down comforters. There's no reason to shiver when you can snuggle instead!

See the difference? The latter paints a more vivid picture of the comforter than the former.

Review this one?

Before

Whether you're doing aerobics, Pilates, or any other workout, Ziox sneakers will give you the support you need. Specifically made for indoor low- and high-impact exercise, Ziox is created to keep you on the path to meeting your fitness goals.

After

Whether you're performing an aerobic, Pilates, or other workout, Ziox sneakers will offer you the support you need. Specifically engineered for indoor low- and high-impact exercise, Ziox is designed to keep you on the path to accomplishing your fitness goals.

What's the difference? Why are the "afters" so much more powerful than the "befores"? Because compelling verbs were used. Verbs bring the action to your copy. They give the reader (or at least they should give the reader) something to envision. You need Super Verbs to entice your readers. For example, instead of just "get into bed," we say, "leap into bed." Instead of "being cold" and "heat things up" we say, "shivering" and "snuggle." When you read that, you begin to envision what action is taking place in a very specific way.

Where do you find these Super Verbs? Everywhere you look! Here's a short list. You can also visit free sites like http://www.thesaurus.com for more.

Verbs vs. Super Verbs

  • Accent - emphasize, underscore

  • Break - smash, crush, demolish

  • Eat - consume, devour, feast

  • Forgive - pardon, excuse, overlook

  • Hate - detest, loathe, despise

  • Imagine - envision, conjure, conceptualize

  • Improve - enhance, refine, perfect

  • Jump - leap, lunge, bound

  • Learn - discover, grasp, comprehend

  • Like - admire, adore, cherish, delight in

  • Make - create, engineer, design

  • Promise - vow, swear

  • Reveal - manifest, unveil, disclose

Take some time to go beyond the ordinary. Find a few Super Verbs to use in your copy in order to boost excitement and interest in the products/services you write about. That added attention, which Super Verbs bring, can easily correlate to additional sales.

By Karon Thackston © 2004
http://www.learn-copywriting.com

About The Author

Karon Thackston is a professional copywriter with over 20 years of success. If you're tired of endlessly searching the 'Net in hopes of finding the latest copywriting techniques, or if you need an up-to-date directory filled with the best ways to learn copywriting, then visit Karon's directory at http://www.learn-copywriting.com today for the widest collection of the most popular copywriting resources available.

IF PUBLISHING ON A WEBSITE, USE THIS RESOURCE BOX:
Karon Thackston is a professional copywriter with over 20 years of success. If you're tired of endlessly searching the 'Net in hopes of finding the latest copywriting techniques. If you need an up-to-date directory filled with the best ways to learn copywriting then visit Karon's directory at Learn Copywriting today for the widest collection of the most popular copywriting resources available.


MORE RESOURCES:

Announcing Copywriting Tips Blog Exclusively for Consultants and ...
PR Web (press release), WA - Jul 22, 2008
Stacey Mathis Copywriting, the coach and consultant copywriter, recently launched a blog offering copywriting and marketing tips and other industry ...


SEO copywriting tips from Jill Whalen of High Rankings
Search Engine Watch - Jul 22, 2008
And six-and-a-half-years later, I’m still quoting her SEO copywriting advice in the “Introduction to Search Engine Marketing” sessions at SES conferences ...


Houston Copywriter Launches New Website
PR-USA.net (press release), Bulgaria - Jul 22, 2008
Eric Brantner unveils a new website to promote his new line of business copywriting services. July 23, 2008—Eric Brantner, a Houston copywriter, ...


Website Overseers – A Natural New Trend in the SEO, SEM and ...
Free Press Release Center (press release), Canada - 21 hours ago
When web professionals give quotations for a new website, they may include design, graphics, SEO, SEM and perhaps even copywriting. ...


AME Info (press release)

Ally Pace announces new projects win
AME Info (press release), United Arab Emirates - Jul 22, 2008
Ally, Dubai-based freelance copywriter, and who formally launched her UAE freelance copywriting business just four months ago, is celebrating the addition ...


Project Leader Copywriting
Oneworld, Netherlands - Jul 18, 2008
The department is responsible for six projects: Public Relations, Advertising, Publicity Stunt, Copywriting, Online Media and Website. ...


Point, click, read: The power of good Web copy
Temple Terrace University Beacon, FL - Jul 22, 2008
"Don't make your Web site look like an ad" is rule number one of Web copywriting, says Maria Veloso, director of Web Copywriting University. ...


Freelance UK

Tweaking your way to copywriting hell
Freelance UK, UK - Jul 15, 2008
Definition of tweak: “I read a book on copywriting over the weekend and wrote my own copy. It sucks. I desperately need your help, but I’m too cheap to pay ...


Leap to the top with new in-house web copywriting service from ...
Response Source (press release), UK - Jul 15, 2008
From today, Leapfrogg is offering customers the use of another great search marketing service: In-house web copywriting. Leapfrogg works to ensure your ...


The Copywriting Institute Announces New Media Marketing Package ...
PR-CANADA.net (press release), Montenegro - Jul 11, 2008
The Copywriting Institute, a training and resources company for copywriters, announced the launch of their New Media Marketing Package. ...

Copywriting - Google News

home | site map
© 2006